Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, March 25, 2020
shark dive
Hi, I'm Matt and I have made a pobble writing about a shark dive I hope you like it.
I did this on a google doc, it was pretty fun and I have put lots of description.
Have you ever done a pobble writing starter?
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Wow Matt! Stunning piece of writing! I really like how you have been really specific with you descriptions. I can imagine myself being face to face with that shark, definitely scary!!! Maybe next time you could explain to your audience what a Pobble writing starter is, then those who don't know can try it themselves.
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