Kiora bloggers welcome back today I will show you my persuasive writing on why kids should have phones which were doing in literacy here it is.
I reckon I did pretty well and Its still a work in progress.
Do you want a phone?
Friday, September 11, 2020
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Hi my name is Marcus and I'm from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your post I agree kids should have phones. Maybe next time you could make the embedment lager. When I first saw it I was interested because it looks very nice when I read it it was even better, I got a lot of information from it. See you later check out my blog. https://wpsmarcusw.blogspot.com/
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